一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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I remembered a busy day one minute ago. It was last wednesday and the weather was bad. At the morning I received a call about a case that our goods cannot be delivered because of a typhoon, and then I thought I will have trouble. When I came in the office, then found the door was not opened yet. We all stand at the door and waiting for our colleague Kelly. Finally, Kelly was coming at ten o' clock , it was so late! right ?