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There are increasingly number of young people are mainly concerned with prestigious careers and wealth. It seems that we ignore the benefits of helping our community and country.In order to improve this situation, our country require young people to finish some type of community service.Actually,there is no doubt it arouses people’s interest in community service. Community service refers to unpaid voluntary work that a performs for the benefit of his or her local community.As more and more people to take apart in community services, the society is more harmony. There exits a wide group of people in need, such as the disabled,orphans,lonely elderly people and so on.We spend our leisure to do some community services which can give them a help. Undoubtedly that can be worthy. The another type of community services maybe is beneficial to our whole society instead of individual.At that point, advocating community services is of great benefit. Community service is a voluntary work that do a good deed for strange.Doing something good for someone else is not just what is acceptable or expected, it is an outright surprise. Although it may sound somewhat cliche, doing good deeds brighten someone’s day.With the development of the society, people ignore the spirit value.Taking part in community service,they would clam down and reflect on the ideas of their lives.Also, they can develop a sense of responsibility. Finally, we can learn something different from your community services. Communicating with different groups from the whole society, we are likely to learn some skills by sharing our experiences.Only can you enjoy the community services when you have loving heart and pay the truth. People can enjoy the benefit of community service while they realize the meaning of it. There will be more and more people taking part in community service actively.