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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；
"A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.”Is a saying widely acknowledged,people still fall into the trap of irrelevant information easily.Simple as the proverb is,it intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than what we might sense at the first glance. We are living in a world full of information,but some information cannot help the cultivation of individual capacity or cope with emergency situation,in other words,irrelevant.The useless information indeed poses a great threat to our life.For example,when a student trying to study English,a host of people might give him various skills to study English.But only he knows what is the appropriate way for himself,other information can be just misleading. We students must reexamine the information before act in order to ascertain if the information is useful.Only this way can we witness the ideal scene in which people can embrace the glorious future.
