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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够使用一些不错的从句；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；
As a college student,we need establish our ends in different time.This can be better echoed by the saying"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket".Indeed,If we had walking the way that does not work,we should walk other way to attain our ends. Take luxun as an example,his major is medicine and he go to Japan for learn it well.However,he change his mind to be a writer due to China encounter disaster.It had wildly noted that luxun is not put all his hope for become a doctor,he has change his mind become a writer for help his country.Hence,if luxun never give up his first goal---become a doctor,perhaps we could not read his works and we will sad for that lose a remarkable writer in history of China.Meantimes,because of luxun change his mind,he think to be a writer can also help people. Generally speaking,we need each goals in different level.there is person who put all hopes in one things,once he is fairlured,he will lose everything.No matter what life change happens to you,what you should do is just do not put all eggs in one basket.
