作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Mr.Jiang, I am writing this letter for the purpose of inviting you to attend our dinner party on behalf of all the students from the English department. As our graduation is around the corner,we have planned to hold a dinner party,so that we can recollect the memories of our life and study in the university.Thus,we are writing this letter in the hope that you can join us. The party is going to be held on the evening of next Monday in Kunlun Hotel,which is near our university.If you would like to come,please give me a call before this weekend and I will meet you at our school gate.We are looking forward to your arrival with pleasure. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei