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It is a not-uncommon social phenomenon that the university rankings are especially prevalent in our country.As regards whether we should support university ranking,everybody has his own respective. A recent survey shows that host of people held the view that university ranking enjoys obvious advantages. By university ranking,youngest are able to obtain more helpful information when they select the universities.Furthermore,students from high ranking university can easily be put in a beneficial position in the job-hunting in the future.Nevertheless,the others believed that university ranking did more harm than good. As far as I am concerned,there is no denying that university ranking indeed enjoyed many obvious advantages,however,its disadvantages equally should not be neglected in any possible manners.
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