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新东方托福高分作文:商家可以不惜一切利益盈利吗?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:48浏览次数:633
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题目要求:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

题目分析:

不能同意这个观点。商业的首要目的确实是盈利(profit-making)。但是任何企业团体作为社会的组成部分,有责任考虑到整个社会的利益(overall welfare of the society),所以不能为所欲为(do whatever one wants to do; have one's own way; have [take] one's (full) swing; stop at nothing)。法制的必要性。
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;

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Making profits is the last goal of every business. And it's for sure that all the businessman will think out excellent means for making profits as much as possible. But nowadays, many businesses ignore the law and do whatever they want to. As a part of the society, I think they have to overall welfare of the society. So in my point of view, I against with the statement which showed above. Admittedly, using suitable means which can lead you to achieve your final goal is very significant, and is true that traders the profit to last their lives. For instance, my uncle, a clever man with talents in business who also have responsibilities has done well in his own business. The reason for this is just he always can come up with a lot of ideas that others even dare not think. So he can always succeed. However, to say Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit is an overstatement. To be one part of our social, we cannot compare our own profit with the countries profits. Take one of my father's friends for example, he used to be a good trader, but he is very greedy and mean he tries all the ways that he could to make money, but almost all of these ways are harm for the customers and social, for example, he put some chemical additions into their products and it's harmful for customers' health. But finally, he ends up arresting by the government. In conclusion, businessmen should not do anything they can to make a profit, they just have to think about others' profits. So I against the statement 100 percent.

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