Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;
With the development of science, many new subjects has change or impact the way of people. In the past time, we must through going to someone home to make a face to face taking. So this way have take many unavoidable difficulties to us. For example, we should take time to go and sometime our friends no at home, for it, we can not got something we want. But the internet can let we to chance this bad condition, it enables we contact our friends and family in our spare time. However, just like every thing both has advantage and disadvantage, internet also has it disadvantage, such as it do not can reveal our expression when we type, and it easy make us desolate some people around us. Do you thank a people always can not face-to-face met people? I thanks it can not become a truth. Form what has been mentioned above, we can draw a conclusion that internet can chance the way of chatting, but it can not replace the face to face talking.