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2004年6月英语四级作文真题:旅游向导

发布时间:2013-05-16 19:02浏览次数:1181
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include: 
● some welcoming words   
● the schedule for the day    
● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)   
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.  
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a to-be graduate from Sichuan University.I am writing the letter for the purpose of applying for a position of sales manager. My qualifications are as follows.Firstly,in the past 4 academic years,I have proved myself to be a straight-A student,awarded a series of scholarships.Besides,my English is particularly excellent,which will reach the requirements set by a foreign enterprise like yours.Finally,I am a good team player,self-motivated and eager to learn.In short,I believe I deserve your consideration. I should be very happy if you would schedule an interview with me.I am looking forward to your prompt reply. Yours truly Zhang Wei

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