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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨;

用户练习作文:

With the development of science, many new subjects have changed or impacted the way of people. For the past time, we must go to someone's home to make a face to face taking. So this way will take many unavoidable difficulties to us. For example, we should take time to go and sometime our friends no at home.For it, we not got something we want. But the internet can let us change this bad condition, it enables we contact our friends and family in our spare time. However, just like everything both has advantage and disadvantage, internet also has it disadvantage, such as it does not reveal our expression when we type, and it easy let us desolate some person around us. Do you thank a person can never face-to-face met people? It is not a truth. From what has been mentioned above, we can draw a conclusion that internet can change the way of chatting, but it can not replace the face to face talking.

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