2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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hi welcome to Hangzhou city ,this is a beautiful city and Zhengjiang provincal capital . here has two famous rivers ,one is Qiangtang river ,another is the beijing-hangzhou grand canal .Hangzhou is famous for scenery , West lake is Hangzhou brand . what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?