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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter for the purpose of applying for the position of English interpreter,which was advertised by your company on the local newspaper. My qualifications are as follows.Firstly,I graduated from the English Department of Tsinghua University,which entitled me to excellent English.In addition,I acted as an interpreter in a tourist agency for three years and this experience has laid a solid foundation for the work here.Finally,I am a good team player,self-motivated and eager to learn.From what has been illustrated above,I am certain that I deserve your consideration. I will appreciate it greatly if you could schedule an interview with me.I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei