2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够使用一些不错的从句；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；

As we can see in this chart in which the statistics from US Bureau of Labor in 2010,people who have higher degree earn more money than the people who have a high school diploma.Therefore,it's no doubt that the high degree people have,the more meney people earn in gernally. Some people opposite this view.In their opinion,there are still many people who didn't have a high degree earning much money.Moreover,degree can't stand for our acknowledge,so how much we earn don't depend on degree. As far as I am concerned,awaring more acknowledge that is benifit for us to get a good job.And the degree can show to others how many acknowledges we have.That is to say,if we want a brilion future,all we have to do is studying hardly to get a high degree. At last,the society developes quckily,we need more acknowledges to adapt to the word.