2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；

As we can see in this chart in which the statistics from US Bureau of Labor in 2010,people who have higher degree earn more money than the people who have a high school diploma.Therefore,it's no doubt that the high degree people have,the more meney people earn in generally. Some people oppose this view.In their opinions,there are still many people who didn't have a high degree earning much money.Moreover,degree can't stands for our acknowledge,so how much we earn that don't depend on degree. As far as I am concerned,knowing more acknowledge that is benefit for us to get a good job.And the degree can show to others how many acknowledges we have.That is to say,if we want a good job in the future,all we have to do is studying hardly to get a high degree. At last,the society developes quckly,we need more acknowledges to adapt to the word.