2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；

It is wildly noted that make a conclude immediately what you hear and you see is unwise .There are so many mistake what happens due to it.However, what can we do that to avoid it? We make mistake because of we never think about this things,maybe we are angry in that time.So firstly we need calm down and consider the things fact,only in this way can we did not make mistake.Second,we can ask people who stay in there to understand entire events.Many mistake happens due to people do not realize all things. As far as I am concerned,make a conclude immediately what you hear and you see is unwise,we should use correct witness to comment others people,and we should more communicate with others,in this way we can avoid mistake.