2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章层次较为清晰；

With the development of the technology,our life become more and more convenient and quick.Today almost everyone has their own cell phone,they use cell phone to call their friends and family numbers ,play games,play wetchat or find relevant content what they want to know.But do you detect that more you use the cell phone with a long time,more you will be addicted to it.Accordingly, more and more person can't leave their cell phone any more.They even use their cell phone when they are crossing the street,and in order to see they using walking sticks replace their eyes.But as far as I am concerned,these bad habits may let them fall into danger.And it will cause traffic accidents sometimes.What's more,using too much cell phone may cause their vision to drop.So I suggest we should use cell phene properly,don't spend too much time to use cell phone.You will find your life become more enrich.