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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11315
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;全文结构较为严谨;

用户练习作文:

With the development of the technology,our life become more and more convenient and quick.Today almost everyone has their own cell phone,they use cell phone to call their friends and family numbers ,play games,play wechat or find relevant content what they want to know.But do you detect that more you use the cell phone with a long time,more you will be addicted to it.Accordingly, more and more person can't leave their cell phone any more.They even use their cell phone when they are crossing the street,and in order to see they using walking sticks replace their eyes.But as far as I am concerned,these bad habits may let them fall into danger.And it will cause traffic accidents sometimes.What's more,using too much cell phone may cause their vision to drop.So I suggest we should use cell phene properly,and then you will find your life became more enrich.

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