2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；

Along with the advanced of theInternet,the online shopping which is become popular.of course,everything has two sides,advantage and disadvantage.on the one hand,shopping on the Internet improved the finance quickly developing.on the other hand,it save a plenty of time for people to do other things.the bad side that we can find which is effecting our work and harming our eyes. As far as I am concernd,weshould take some measures to solve this problem.