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The famous Albert Einstein's remark "I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious" is thought-provoking, which tells us the significance of being curious. Keeping passionately curious is usually more important than special talents, with which I definitely agree. Although those who have special talents often can attain success, the inner reason is that they are of curious at the same time. First of all, people are usually passionately curious about what they are good at. In addition, it is being curious that encourages people to search the truth persistently. For instances, if one is curious about English, one will be willing to spend a substantial amount of time learning English and be good at English, even if he has no special talents. Finally, only by being curious on something can people explore their potential and attain success in due course. From what has been discussed above, we come to a conclusion that, being passionately is essential to attain success. Most people who have no special talents also can get a great achievement.
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