安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain )。
(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
(2)乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。
注意
1. 词数:80 词左右。
2. 请不要逐字翻译
作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;简单句偏多了;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;
Welcome to the Yellow Mountain.The YellowMountain is a beautiful place. You often listen the Yellow Mountain .Today you will join in it.The YellowMountain in the south of Anhui is one of the most CHANE .There are many people from many country in every year . You will take 3 hours if you by bus.You can also by train or plane to go there. You can climb the mountion .In there you will see the sea of clouds and woundrous pines unique rocks and so on. Many beautiful place wait for you .come on.