文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次较为清晰。
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter for the purpose of applying for the position of English interpreter,which was advertised by your company on the local newspaper. My qualifications are as follows.Firstly,I graduated from the English Department of Tsinghua University,which entitled me to excellent English.In addition,I acted as an interpreter in a tourist agency for approximate three years.Therefore,this experience has laid a solid foundation for the work here.Finally,I am a good team player,self-motivated and eager to learn.From what has been illustrated above,I confirmedly believe that I deserve your consideration. I will appreciate it greatly if you could schedule an interview with me.I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei