2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句不足，简单句比重高；作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；

My hometown is called HaiFeng.It is a small town in guangdong province.Lisa is going to my hometown and visit me next week.Although HaiFeng is small,it have a long history in China.I am looking for some places and take her to have a see.The Red Square is one of the places I want to take.Becauce it is very important in haifeng.The first Soviet regime in China is built in the Red Square.And it is the only two red square in the world.Another one is in Russia.WenTianXiang park is the another place I planed to.It is built to in memory of WenTianXiang who lived in Yuan dynasty.And HaiFeng also have many delicious snack.I think Lisa will like this trip.