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I have a good friend. She is good at pintting and studying. She tells me that her hobby is studying languages. She can speak English, Spanish, a little French and Italy. Every weekend, we go shopping or watching movie togehter. Sometimes, we just have a walk around the city to find some special food that we have never tried before.