【题目要求】
Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
【题目讲解】
这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要],而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多,可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。
两个问题。引言3 sentences之后,1. 讨论二者的利弊,看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法,看合段的结论3 sentences。
起段引言 Introduction
开头第一句。申论主题:使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。
开头第二句。集中焦点:冲突是两难自解。
开头第三句。一分为二:分头指引讨论二者利弊。
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;
Libraries habe long existed in people's life. However, with the development of the Internat, people balk at the necessary of the existence of libraries as people have a access to the varied information and knowledge by just clicking the mouse at their hand. It is well-known that libraries provide us with a wealth of knowledge and information. We can enjoy ourselves in them where contain a great amount of books and learning sources.