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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；
The advantage of saving money Altough some people think that saving money in these ways may not make us smart consumers.But as far as I am concerned, saving money is many advantages. Firstly, I think that saving money in our ordinary activities is not only a virtue which we seek for, but can make more money ued in more more important aspects. In other word, saving money makes us be a better man and has more opportunity to achieve what we are keen on.Secondly,at the background of the world economy is declining, it is extremely necessary to save our money.Because earning money is more difficult than before,and the good habit of saving money will cut down the chance of living a uptight live or even a tough live. According to my view, saving money is a good way to make our future life more flexible and colourful，and it surely has much advantages that we can't imagine.
