2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is KaiFeng ,an ancient city of China.I Konw my foreign friend is interested in chinese culture.As the host,i must make the guest be enjoy. Firstly to speaking,i will show the decious food in KaiFeng 's nights.Freakly,ti is crowd because of it be known for all the mans in China.In addition,the scenic spots are worth to see too.For example,LongTing and QingMingShangHeYuan,and so on.The dynasty of Song was chose a site for the capital in KaiFeng ever before.So,this experience would be fulll with culture of Song Dynasty.Sounds wonderful. A well-organized plan is successful.My foreign friend of Lucy,i present a very hot-hearted to you.See you next time.