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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加从句的使用；
The advantage of saving money Although some people think that saving money in these ways may not make us smart consumers.Nevertheless as far as I am concerned, saving money is many advantages. Firstly, I think that saving money in our ordinary activities is not only a virtue which we seek for, but can put more money in more more important aspects. In the other word, saving money makes us be a better man and has more opportunity to achieve what we are keen on.Secondly,at the background of the world economy is declining,at the same time，the future economic situation seems less optimistic， it is extremely necessary to save our money.Because earning money is more difficult than before,and the good habit of saving money will cut down the probability of living an unhappy life or even a tough life. In accordance with my view, saving money properly，what is a good way to make our future life more flexible and colourful，and it surely has many advantages that we can't imagine.
