文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;
"Seeing is believing", goes the old saying, which indicates that most of us accept what we see as the truth. However, what is seen or heard may be just partial facts and sometimes can even be deceptive. It is unwise to reach hasty conclusions the moment we see or heard something. Since seeing is not always believing, we should be cautious about things around us. All kinds of online information, true or false, is a case in point. In an age of information explosion, various reports, facts, and opinions pour in from Internet websites. While at the same time, numerous fake reports, one-sided opinions and irresponsible rumors also spread quickly online. If we indiscriminately believe what is said or shown on the network and make thoughtless judgments about others or help spread rumors unconsciously, we may hurt innocent people or even disrupt social order. Therefore, independent thinking is always needed before we make judgments. In brief, we should not reach firm conclusions before we get a thorough understanding of the facts. Keep eyes open and think twice before making judgments.
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