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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第11篇:从电视还是书本上能学到更多东西

发布时间:2013-08-12 17:05浏览次数:673
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

People learn more by watching television than by reading books.

人们是从电视中还是书本上能学到更多的东西。不同的人有不同的看法。

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用户练习作文:

Nowadays, with the development of the technology, the television cannot only provide a video but also can be a machine of learning. And for a book, more colorful and make people put more interest in it. Both of two things can be good ways of learning, which one is better? Some other people think that book is more traditional and it's better while I think television is much better. People learn more when they have an interest in what they are doing. Television, therefore, is a much better learning tool than books because it is more interesting and not boring. For instance, there are countless educational programs on television that are dedicated to teaching children. Children can find out more about history, language, culture, and many other topics. Those TV programs present the information in formats which are secured to keep children's attention. Television thus provides colorful and stimulating ways for children to find out. While books can describe things, television can actually show the places and things that are being described. This is one of the reasons why so many people enjoy watching documentaries on television. I love that documentaries on television. I love that documentaries on science and nature, especially when they cover topics that I learned at school. Since I want to learn through visual methods, documentaries can explain things to me much more clearly than my school textbooks ever could. Thanks to documentaries, I have improved my knowledge base tremendously. In conclusion. i think all the evidence above can showed my point of view exactly, although book can provide the education in much more better ways but i think to compare with television, those advantages of book can all be ignored, so i totally agree with the statement mentioned above

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