语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;
we have a conclusion if we saw something or hear something without judgement is wrong for example we saw a old man lying on the ground and a young man stand by him we think the younger hit the elder the truth is the young who is helping the elder
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