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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;

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Recently,a saying that "If you cannot do great things,do small things in a great way"has been discussed fiercely.From my perspective,the implied meaning of the sentence is that if we can't take the tremendous responsility,we should deal with small things at first in daily life. From my point of view,a multitude of examples can be found to illustrate this fact in our life.We all have the same examples that we intend to be an environmental protect which maybe exert little impact on the environmental protect which maybe exert little impact on the environmental pollution.However,we can do small thing to reduce the pollution in daily life.For example,we can pick up ribbish,save water,protect animals and plant more trees.The small things can be carried out by everyone in routine life.In addition,with the rapid development of society full of science and technology,a host of people,youngsters particular,fail to achieve great success.But we can change our mind to the small things which are easily completely. From what we have discussed above,we can safely come to the conclusion that when we can't do great things,we can attain important to the small thing.Only by doing this,can we embrace a promising future.

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