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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;

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As the saying goes, "if you cannot do great things, so small things in a great way", which tells us that the small things are also meaningful. This sentence, in its simple yet thought-provoking way, encourages us to wonder the reason why doing small things in a great way is meaningful. In my opinion, large amounts of small things consist great things, and we should do small things in a great way to make the world a better place to live in. First of all, hardly can someone accomplish a great mission alone. People usually cooperate with others to achieve some great things. In addition, it is small things that consist great things. We should not only do small things but also do it in a right way. Putting up a building is a case in point. If we wishes to put up a building, we must spend a substantial amount of time in cooperating in groups. What we needed to do are small things in a right way. From what have been discussed above, we come to a conclusion that, those small things we do persistently will turn into a tremendous influence on some great things in a good way. Let's start small and do what we can to make the world a better place to live in.

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