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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;

用户练习作文:

Every people will face to make some judgments. In my opinion, only those judgments made before careful investigation and fully consideration should be trusted. That is, snap judgments should not be simply trusted. Firstly, because our judgment should be based on the information we obtained, there are some misleading information which will cause wrong judgment. For example, when we buy a commodity through, we will find many merchandise who sell it with different price. Every seller try to prove that it is better than others and persuade you to buy. Someone will show you false information. In this time, if you trust your snap judgment without carefully investigating, you will get a counterfeit or pay more money than the true value of commodity. Moreover, even through we make a snap judgment, we should be skeptical and need to find enough proof to support our judgment. Because, sometimes, there is no enough information indeed and we have to make a decision. In this kind of condition, we assume the snap judgment is right and then find some evidence which can help us to check whether the judgment is right or wrong. In a word, for snap judgment, we should be skeptical. Only after carefully investigating, we can trust it.

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