2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm very delighted to hear that a foreign friend is going to take vovation in my hometown and there is no doubt that we will realize a facinating place. In general,my hometown is famous with all kind of fruits and nature scenes and so as we all know,people always call it 'lland of lemons and fruits',which including Aksu apple,Hami lemon,kurle pear,watermelon and so on.Of course,you can also realize various magic and ancient culture that have been develop thousands years ago.In other words,you will feel differernt culture and fall in love with it if you arrive there. Finally,I really hope you can like there if you can come and my families will welcome you with a very enthusiam in my hometown!come on!