2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；

It is a not-uncommon phenomenon that parents are urged to send their kids to art classes.In no country other than China,it has been said,is this phenomenon more obvious. With the rapid development of society,people’s quality of life is raising,and a host of people is beginning to believe that for their kids,art classes may be helpful both in the cultivation of individual characteristics and the tastes of art.However,others hold a view that sending their kids to are classes indeed enjoys obvious advantage,but it shouldn't be the excuse to sacrifice the childhood of the kids. As far as I am concerned,whether we should send the kids to art classes must depends on if the children are interested in art.Only this way can we hope to witness the scene in which all the kids can enjoy their childhood to the uttermost.