2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If were me ,I would take my foregin friends to xia meng ,a beautiful city in china. To start with ,my hometown, xia meng, is so closed to ocean that there are man y beautiful scenery ，such as wonderful beach and sunlight，blue sky ， characteristic stores and so on 。Most importantly, the local people are enthusiastic to treat you。 Besides, I will you to anywhere if you want to go . I can tell you some local story of characteristic stores . In a word ,if you want to take a thrip in china , it is worth to going my hometown ,xia meng. Welcome to xia meng ,I will let you feel at home.