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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；全文结构较为严谨；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；
If were me,I would take my foreign friends to Xia meng,a beautiful city in China. To start with ,my hometown, Xia meng, is so closed to ocean that there are many wonderful thing，such as wonderful beach and sunlight，blue sky ， characteristic stores and so on 。Most importantly, the local people are enthusiastic to treat you。 Besides, I will take you to aywhere if you want to go. I can tell you some stories of characteristic stores. In a word, if you want to take a thrip in China, it is worth to going my hometown ,Xia meng. Welcome to xia meng, I will let you feel at home.
