语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法基础较为扎实;
Although “It is unwise to jump to conclusion upon seeing or hearing something”is an old proverb widely acknowledged,people still fall into the trap of inaccurate information easily. We are living in a world full of information,the wrong information is not only harmful but also damaging the personal growth.Taking the study of English as an instance,you cannot improve your English in the wrong way,put it another way,wrong information is just misleading. From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that,it is unwise to jump to conclusion upon seeing or hearing something.Before we make the conclusion,we must reexamine the information in order to ascertain if it is helpful.Only this way can we hope to witness the scene in which people enjoy their life to the uttermost
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