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Hi,my good friend,welcome to my hometown Ji Lin.After a long flight from your mother country,you must be very tired.Have a good relax and I will take you to some places which are very popular. You must haven't seen the most popular scenery view in my hometown or even in China.The rime!It is so popular that is known to every countries in Asia.Not only because of it's beauty,but also for that it is constituted by the coldest season and the most simple view which mske up such a surprising scenery.And you can go to Jingyue lake to have a good view.It is as popu;ar as Riyue lake in Tai Wan.Even in winter ,it is also beautiful to be visit.I do believe it will not make you feel disappoint. There are also many good places you must go,hope you have a good trip in Ji Lin!
