题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者在句法层面做的很棒;
When it comes to the topic of trust,everybody has his own perspective,but an inspiring idea goes that 'nothing can be compared with honesty when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics'.Simple as the proverb is,it intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than what we might sense at the first glance. Honesty can help foster in the young the morally sound values and outlook on the world and life.Honesty is the steel that forges the supporting structure of society,and the society cannot grow steady,if this invaluable asset is ever neglected in any possible manner. From what has been discussed above,we can safely come to the conclusion that People who aspires to embrace the glorious future must commit the time and energy without any hesitation.Only this way can we hope to witness the scene in which people can embrace their glorious future.