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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨;

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Some people enjoy living together with their parents after they have grown up. They hold the opinion because, living with parents, they can take better care of their parents and vice versa. Meanwhile, they can turn to their parents for help if they get into trouble or have some difficulties. To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable than that in a small family.   Others, however, prefer to live separately. They cherish the idea to be independent of their parents, seek more freedom and wish to have a place of their own, in which they can do what they like. Bedsides, they don't want to be overprotected by their parents but long for chance to face the society by themselves.   As to me, I like an independent life style in spite of the fact I love my parents. Different generations have different life styles and values. What one generations likes may not be another generation's fondness. Living separately, each generation can enjoy different value. In addition, by leading an independent life, I can train my character and develop my own ability to deal with things encountered in my life.

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