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Meno From:Li Ming TO:Mary Since I will leave for beijing for a week to meet with Mr.Biack who may be our major customer in next year,I'm afraid I can't talk with you about holding New Year's party.Would you may do me a favor?Please tell me when and where the party will be held and the necessary perpartion once they decided.I will spare no effort to do those thing I can do.