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The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Today we are all live in an information explosion world.Internet exists everywhere and take the role of our social media.We can see people bow their heads and stare at their mobile phone.As I know most of them are using wechat or microblog.Ok,It's fine to use your mobile phone for pleasure,It's your civil right.But if you use it everywhere,everytime even you're attending a meeting or a date. You just bend your heavy head and enjoy yourself.Do you know how will the people around you feel?It seemed that their existence isn't neccessary at all.It's too bad. We need to admit, In the past few years.Internet indeed brought us so much convenience and enriching our daily life.We can shop,order a take out,study or work on line.And one thing unbelievable is that we may meet our Mr Right on line.Internet can almost fufill all we need.It seemed that we don't need to go out any more because everything is within reach by the kind help of the internet,we can enjoy our vivid life in home.Some people did do this,and as a result,they sank into the convenience and turned more and more lazy and fat.They lose friends in reality cause they prefer to chat on line with those unknown friends rather than go out and spend time with their real ones.You will not feel the importance of the real friends unless you get into trouble.When you suffer from a bad cold and too weak to move.The virtual friends will show their caring for you by saying"Oh,poor boy,you need to go to a doctor and get some medcine."But a friend in reality will comes your home,take care of you and take you to a doctor.That's the difference. So how do you think?Stand up and get away from facebook,wechat and QQ.If you get bored,just call you friends and go out with them,it will be more fun and doesn't waste time at all. Of course,social media is not completely useless.I'm not urging you to get rid of it .My advice is using it properly.When you're too busy to call your freinds and you want to send your greets to them,then you can send a lovely little massage to broden your friendship and convey your love. Internet is just a tools to assist our life.Don't let it control your life.Hope everyone has a healthy interpersonal communication.Wish you good luck!
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