GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

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Science and art, playing a vital role in common life,are the most essential types for the mankind progress.The function of science is contrubuting the developemnt of society.Meanwhile,the art is helpful for entertament and broading peoples horizon.It could not be lacked for any of it.In one socity the development of science makes the art types flourished and the art is the reaction of the achievement of science progress. The development of science makes the art types flourished.In the antient times the level of science is relatively low,so that the kinds of art is limited.There were only simple types such as singing,dancing,opera and so on.In nowdays the science is so developed that the arts are abundant.Movies is the typical because of the science development.With the deve lopment of science,the types of art will be more and more . The art is the reaction of the achievement of science progress.As we know,some new types of movie appear in morden society.For example,3D cartoon is popular kind in the movie market.The pixar animation company produced many famous 3D cartoons,which achieved great reputation.The popularity of 3D cartoon due to the developing of 3D technology. To sum up,the two different types are the same important things for a society.There are close connection between them.