2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；

I‘d like to take my foreign friend to visit a splendid place in my hometown which named Dan Xia mountain. Dan Xia mountain is one of the best place in China. As for me, Dan Xia mountain is the best place to relax. Because once you climb up to the top of mountain can you absorb the fresh air so that make you feeling more relax. So, in my opinion, Dan Xia mountain is the best place to go with my foreign friend.