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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:54浏览次数:2609
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的。你的看法是?给出具体的原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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"Everything perfect, all comes from the appropriate reform" said Balzac, a famous novelist. Under the tendency of economic globalization, only an enterprise with its own unique way of development that it will make the company keep unbeaten status in the economic globalization. One of unique ways is reform because it will benefit from reformation. To begin with, it is important to keep a high quality of products. Then, strengthening the brand effect is the way to reform. A product with a good reputation can make more people full of desire for it. The last, expanding trade in goods and services that can contribute to a company. [102] First of all, company devote to improve the quality of products, because quality is essential for products. For instance, Reeves who is the manager in the Haier company, ha said company has been in progress, and has been seeking ways to innovation. Therefore, the gold is to guarantee the quality of products of company (as cited in Gifford, 2015, para. 10), by investing in science research and developing. However, many products made in China, people who come from world-wide willing to buy, not the high quality but the price are not expensive. A manager of a small business in Thailand Tha Vy deemed that the Chinese products shown up in his country at the first time, but the quality is terrible (as cited in Gifford, 2015, para. 6). In short, now most of the Chinese company's products are lack of competitiveness, only a fraction part of the company is aware of which the product core is quality. If they don't pay attention to this problem, it' s arduous for companies to animate their commodities in today's marketplace. Moreover, focusing on the company how to strengthen the brand power. It means the company need devotes to built a good reputation. A typical example. Coca-Cola company has a good reputation in society because the Business Objectives combined social responsibility. The company purpose is to protect the environment, and provides a high-level living standard. The company notes that they have a lot of Hope Primary School in China (as cited in Dai, 2015, para. 22). A company which can do charity will let more people trust it. With the China's rapid economic development, more people become richer. Rich people to the pursuit of luxury goods just due to they believe that these luxuries with good reputation. There is no doubt that those who pursue luxuries want to flaunt their wealth. Another important thing to remember is that these products that really have a good reputation. That is reason that people who want to buy it. So Chinese companies need to strengthen their brand power. Next, a company wants to develop better that it means this produced by the product needs to expand trade in goods and services. China holds a huge market and great demand for development which make Coca-cola company decide to invest much money for exploit new beverage and it gold is to garner large market shares in China. Haier company is one of the leading companies in China. It particularly well in the development of all over the world because it has a wide market regardless of in China or oversea. A product, like Lao Ganma is popularity abroad and in the southern region of China that almost every family possess it. It is a successful product that sells in the overseas. In contrast, Huawei company with its different, it just sells good in China. Therefore, it is necessary to put more products to the overseas market. To sum up, not only can it solve the present problem that Chinese product can not sell well in the world, but also warn the company. The company can reform in these aspects: keep a high quality, strengthening the brand effect, expanding trade in goods and services. As long as the goods have good quality that it can catch customer's heart. If goods have enough strong brand strength which makes the amount of people will pursue it. On no account can we ignore the marketing power because market is quintessence for sell production. It is obvious that Chinese companies are not aware of the importance of the innovation, if these Chinese companies take a reform or change into consideration, the situation of the Chinese products will have a huge change. [127]

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