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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12895
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰;

用户练习作文:

There were many kinds of advertising in our life.They offer the information of various production for people,and also let the merchant get the chance to further development.A kind of advertising is the public service advertising.Its aim is that arouses the people to doing something.Lin Dan,a star of badminton,has performed a public advertising.Does you has seen it? In this advertising,he makes a metaphor that our life is compared to the badminton game,so he exploited the rule of badminton to let us know that‘in our life,we must observe some lowest limit.’ There are two paragraphs in this advertising can sustain its aim.First,in the race of live,we always need to maintain our lowest limit.Second,in the badminton game,if our lose one score,because the badminton has got out the race course,we can try us best to continue the competition for victory.However,if we not maintain our lowest limit,maybe we will forever lose something. According to this advertising,we know that the lowest limit is so importance.

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