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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10534
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式变化多样;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;

用户练习作文:

nowadays ,more and more people talk about whether dialects can accepted in public places .opinons to this matter vary from person to person ,some people agree with this ,because the dialects make our culture more colouful ,we should accept it .on the other hand ,the majority of people do not accept this ,they think it's not easy for people to communicate with each other.in my view ,i vote that we shuld not accept dialects in public places.reasons are as followes. first ,if a keynote speker give his speech with dialects ,it is not easy for listeners to understand his views ,which not only give the speaker more pressure,but also can not express his opinion very accuraatly.second,as putonghua is becoming more and more popular ,we should also use putonghua in the public places,which is a good way show your respect to others . in the end ,all in all,i prefer to expect to accept using standard dialects in public areas,whic h is not only for people to understand your ideas,but also show your respect to others

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