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2011年8月27日雅思写作真题:政府是否应向当地电影业提供经济支持

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:39浏览次数:1553
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Nowadays, people all over the world prefer to watch foreign films much more than the locally produced ones. Why is this the case? Should the government give financial support to the local film industry?

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people today have diversified casual activities during their spare time and watching films is certainly among them There has been increasingly number of foreign films shown in the cinema these days thus many people s preference are films from overseas while it used to be the local ones What brings the phyenomenons to the film industry The most obvious reason is that the developement degree of the foreign film industry is advanced There are countless fantastic movies produced by the foreign film companies everyday since they do have more advanced technology and multiple resourses in that field Besides foreign culture has always been attractive to local people who have desire to acqiure more defferent cultural knowledge Some movies include beautiful landscapes make people decide to travle arboad to find out the true beauty Furthermore people all over the world are big fans of the foreign film superstar so they are fond of the films which their idols performed as well Under these circumstances the government certainly ought to give financial support to the local film industry As the developement of the local film industry will lead to the developement of the relavant industry not to mention the local economy The financial support also devote to the local emplotment and tourism for the film industry can be regarded as a kind of culture which should be delivered to all over the world we have to admit that economy and culture developed balancely will make people lead a stable and colorful life That would be a wonderful dream for the government

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