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Abadon wife and son for 16 years, seek for help after paralising On the Afteroon of Dec. 17, at the door of a resider living in shunde rongguileidi street, a man who sit here on the old cotten blanket for a while, covering a blanket,with his luggage , some packeted meal and bottles of water near from him. He looks like he want to stay here for a long time. Why the man stay here on a such cold day. Is it just for redeeming the relationship with wife and son? In fact, the man surnamed Fan is from Hu Nan province. When he was mason in Ronggui in 1995, he falled in love with the forman’s sister . And then they are married. In 1996, his wife beard a son for him. Because of his wife’s dysgnosia, he abadoned his wife and his three-year old son. At that time, he also worked as a mason in Ronggui, he had never seen his wife and son. Does he just find the feeling of guity to his wife and son? It is not. A few months ago, Mr. Fan was stroked suddenly with paralysis of the right side so to continue to work. Thinking of having not divoce certificate, he want to take refuge in his wife and son. The neighorhood said : Mr.Fan find the people surnamed Liang who are natives of Ronggui. Last week, Mr. Fan came here and sleeped a night a day. But their familes don’t still make him enter. His wife went out and talk to him that she want to make him enter the room but her mother and elder sister disagreed with her. At that time , the neiborhood call the polices to take Mr.Fan away. And later, the surnamed Liang people moved and never came back. The neighbours think Mr.Fan should not came but he came unexpectedly yesterday. The neighbour said that his eating,drinking,peeing,pooping is solved in his sleeping place, which make neighbours have some criticism for his behavior. The neighbourhood committee said that he and the woman surnamed Liang is marriage relationship(marital relation) , and that woman in fact is disable one. Their son is 19 years old and study in high school. All of these days when Mr.Fan abandoned them, they were cared about by relatives. His wife and her 80-year -old mother live tigether and his son grew up with her maternal aunt. They are helped by government and materal aunt. The neighbourhood commitee said that they can’t contact the surnamed Liang familiesnow and his son was ever said definittively that he doesn’t want to take care of him . Our journalists also fail to contact his wife and son. After the communication with Mr.Fan, he said that he is willing to go back to Hunan. And our journalists help him call polices and he was sent to resuce sation whose workers show that they will relocate Mr.Fan properly.
